Dad, this poor little puppy needs a family! Shawn was found on a cold, Christmas night on the side of the road. God is calling you to care for all of his creatures, and adopting Shawn is one simple step in the right direction. Responsibility is an essential trait, and with a house full of children, this puppy can teach many life lessons. Walking the dog, feeding, and playing with him will keep the kids busy and will be the start a lifelong friendship. Although getting Shawn will teach me responsibility, I understand that I must already posses a certain amount of responsibility to take care of him in the first place. I have wonderful time management skills, and will be able to fit time into my schedule to give him the love that he deserves. Adopting Shawn is not free, but I have a job and can help to pay for it. If we have enough money to have cable television all year around, take family vacations to the beach, and own more than one car, we can help this poor puppy. The local humane society always needs help and is filled with animals that need help. The myth that cats and dogs do not get along has be proven incorrect, and Orange Kibby and White Kibby are used to other animals since they came from a farm. It is often said that a dog is a man's best friend, and with the Kibbys getting older, the burden of a dead friend would not be nearly as harsh if we had another pet to love. When you were younger, dad, you had two dogs. You always mention how often you played outside and ran around with them, and the common complaint of my brothers and I spending time inside can be eliminated if we can be privileged enough to have this puppy. Dogs are a lot like humans, and are protective, loving family members. Also, Shawn has the potential of bringing our family closer together. If we all spend time around him, we will be genuinely happier and work together more often to take care of him. I know of an older couple whose kids were moved out. They were lonely, so they adopted a puppy that looked almost exactly like this precious animal. They immediately had a connection, and the dog was loyal to them, learned their rules, and followed them around the house to give them love and attention. After visiting this puppy, my brothers and I immediately had this same connection. Like two long lost sisters meeting for the first time, it is heart wrenching to force us all apart again. This is meant to happen, and with the pros outweighing the cons, adopting Shawn seems like the reasonable approach to save a puppy's disastrous life.
I really like how you started your argument off with a reference to the Bible. By reminding your father about God's will concerning the care of all creatures, you made him stop to really listen to your argument. This reference also added credibility to your argument through what seems to be divine support. It also showed that you knew what you were talking about and that you had prepared for this discussion. Parents are inclined to brush off arguments with no substance and look for clues as to the nature of an argument when their child first presents it. By showing him that you had truly considered the implications of your request, he took your argument seriously. The main points of your argument appeal to the logical and emotional side of your father. You logically explained how you would be able to provide for the dog, and also called upon his emotions by reminiscing about his childhood dogs. Both of these appeals contributed to your solid argument.
I love how you altered your argument to appeal to your audience. Obviously, mentioning God and His will for His children would not go over very well with everyone. Some individuals would not consider that convincing, or even an effective argument. However, being as your parents are very Catholic people, they would be much less apt to ignore these pleas. In addition, you brought up the point about how a dog can teach responsibilities in "a house full of children." Again, this specifically appeals to your parents, as "our family is big enough already" is a probable counterargument. Instead, you addressed this possible inhibition by turning it into an a benefit, which causes your parents to take a different perspective. Finally, you appealed very specifically to your dad when you mentioned his childhood. While this argument certainly would not have been as effective if presented to another individual, it was very well constructed to appeal to your audience. Nice work!
Your use of ethos at the very beginning of your plea is attention grabbing. When you bring God into the argument, it seems almost immoral to reject the puppy. Then, throughout the plea you also use a great deal of pathos and relatable situations that will almost inevitably happen. For example, when you list all of the problems that may arise from having this puppy, you come back with a positive outcome to help you prove your point about the dog being a good thing. If I was Mr. Dave Bobby, I would defiantly get you this puppy!
Invoking God at the beginning of your plea was very nice. We should always do what God wants, and I'm sure He is always in favor of adopting dogs. So nice touch. I didn't even think to do that. I also like how you brought up the misconception that cats and dogs do not like each other. Dogs just like to play a little more aggressively than cats like to play. I know when we had Sierra, she loved our house cat. People would always be astounded that we had both animals out and about at the same time. So I'm sure Orange Kibby and White Kibby will love Shawn. And also the story of how he was found on a cold Christmas night probably would people feel really bad. After all, if he was found on a normal night, it wouldn't really matter. But Christmas, that's a whole different story. All in all, well done. I'd adopt that dog after reading the first three paragraphs.
Grace, I thought you did a great job imploring pathos throughout your blog. If I was a parent, it would really appeal to my emotions. Also, the fact that you used God showed ethos and also pealed to a higher power which I thought was very effective. When you mentioned your kibbies, I laughed really hard. You used the right amount of ethos, pathos, and humor to make a compelling case about adopting the puppy. You convinced me to want to go out and adopt an animal.
Mom, I think we should adopt this puppy. Salvador is just one of many homeless dogs that our local humane society has rescued. We could give him the home and the love that he's never had. In the past, we've had a multitude of different pets. We've had fish, rabbits, chickens, and even pigs. This range of animals has taught me all about caring for different species, and opened my eyes to the responsibilities of owning a pet. I think that a dog would need the same level of mundane care as the pigs and chickens did. However, dogs need more love and attention, which I would be happy to provide. Caring for a dog would be hard because we are away from the house often, but I could give him plenty of attention when we are home. I have exceptional time management skills and can use them to create time for Salvador. In addition, Hannah would definitely play with Salvador all the time. When we do leave for extended periods of time, Salvador could stay with our cousins. I'm sure that Salvador and their dog would get along very well. Dogs help relieve stress. Being with an animal frees up the brain and helps it relax. My high stress lifestyle would greatly benefit from a reduced amount of stress. If we adopted Salvador, the stressful events in my life might not change, but I would be able to respond to them in a more positive manner. Dogs often become loyal and life-long friends with their owners, and this constant supportive love would provide me with an emotional boost. Dogs are expensive, and their extended care has costs as well. However, I have a steady job during the summer months at the pool, and could use this money to help pay for food and other necessities. I am taking on more responsibilities with my job, such as teaching swimming lessons and coaching the swim team. These added activities with provide me with more money so that the portion that goes to my college funding won't be drastically reduced. I know you're allergic to animal hair, but I know that you are mainly allergic to cats. Salvador is a dog, so your allergies wouldn't be as severe as they would if we adopted a cat. Salvador won't shed very much, so there won't be hair all over our house anyways. Pugs have short hairs that don't shed, so your allergies won't be troubled by his presence. The responsibilities of owning a pet are nothing that I haven't undertaken before. Over the course of our pet-owning lives, I have proven myself capable of taking care of many animals. Salvador would be easy for me to take care of, and he would prove to be an exceptional friend to me. I think that adopting Salvador would be a wonderful decision that would positively impact our daily lives.
First of all, you had pigs, rabbits, and chickens? Also, it makes me upset that you are coaching the team this year. You better practice anyway. But about your blog, you did a very good job convincing your mom to buy Salvador. It is important that you understood her possible concerns and addressed them with a solution to overcome the problem. You did this a few times and covered points such as costs, a dog-sitter for when you leave, and allergies. You also did a good job presenting the positives about the stress reducing factors of adopting the pet. Way to go, Ash! You would have convinced me!
Ashley, I loved how you put in the downfalls your mother would see in getting the dog then putting the solution to it. That would leave your mother speechless and she would know just how much time you put into thinking about getting the dog. This would also leave her speechless at the end with no questions to ask becuase you already solved them. The only word she would be able to say is yes!
I'm with Grace Bobby on this one. Pigs, rabbits, and chickens seems like a lot. I don't know if I could handle more than one animal at a time. Anyways...you presented lots of very good points for why you should be allowed to adopt Salvador here. All of that would be for naught though if your mother's allergies were not taken care of. You offered a viable solution for the counterargument which would most likely be enough for your parents to allow you to adopt this puppy. I don't know how decisions are made in your house, but if my mother read that, she would probably beat my father up until he allowed us to adopt this dog. So well done
Ashley, I'm not very good with animals, so pigs and rabbits sounds like a lot. I can't even keep a goldfish for a week. You thought of some interesting points that I did not come across when writing my blog. You also did a nice job in refuting the things you knew your mom would say about you getting a dog. I know there would have to be some persuasion in my house for my dad, my mom would jump at any chance she gets to adopt an animal.
Great Uncle Jose Jambalaya, you should adopt this puppy to fill the space in the house that Great Aunt Jambalaya left when she sadly passed. You loved her and she kept you company for years. You are most likely very depressed. That is understandable. This dog can keep you company for years to come though. I know you will grow a deep attachment to this dog, and it will grow a deep attachment to you. So much heartache is happening for you all at once. I know you loved Star Trek, and Leonard Nimoy's passing probably is making you even more upset. Relax though. The shelter says that this puppy had no form of identification when they picked it up off the street. This means you can name it whatever you want. I'm sure naming it Spock is in order. This will strengthen the bond between you and the dog. The fact you have to walk the dog will also make sure you keep exercising. I know you despise that old treadmill. If you got little Spock here, you would be able to take him on walks. I know you love to take walks. The dog will certainly love taking walks with you too. I know there's that nice trail out behind your house. You could take him on that. That'll make sure he is healthy, and you are healthy, too. After school, Dominic and I could always come over to take care of him if you need some time to chill. We love dogs, and would be absolutely honored to take care of yours. It will also do a very good job teaching us about responsibility. This is a very key trait in our society. Dogs do need to go to the vet every once in a while for checkups, injections, etc. Don't even worry about it. I got my license this past winter. This means that if Spock needs to go to the vet, I will take him. I know that you hate driving. So I have you covered. It'll be a fun car ride for the dog and I. Now I know you are allergic to dog hair. That's ok. My brother and I will make sure he stays groomed and clean. This will reduce the amount of hair that he will shed. If we can keep the amount of hair down to 1 hair molecule for every 200 air molecules, you should not have a reaction. It will be easy to keep the air clean, because you have that air vent downstairs. If you want, I can bring it up and install it. That would alleviate this problem. Also, pugs do not shed as much if they have nutritious meals. Petco in Dubois has plenty of nutritious pet food. I usually end up going to Dubois once every other week to get supplies to make burritos. I could easily stop right in to Petco and grab this food. You're probably wondering why I am so passionate about you adopting Spock. Well, I care for your well being. With the house being empty, you need some company. But also, my parents will not let us adopt a dog. They say it is too much work and they just do not want to deal with it. I understand why they think this. Last time we had a dog, my father ended up doing most of the work because we were too young to do anything. Now we are older and more mature. I believe that us three can make Spock live a fantastic life. And it'll certainly be good for you and him. The pound says that they estimated he was abandoned on the street for weeks. He was very much underweight and dying when they brought him in. He is slowly being nursed back to health, and I believe we can finish the job. So I really do think you should go ahead and adopt him. He will make a wonderful addition to the family.
Your argument was very well done. You combined logical reasons for adopting a dog with emotional reasons as to why your great uncle should adopt a dog. Each one of your supporting ideas was well thought out and presented in an understanding nature. Your tone was both concerned and helpful, and your diction and syntax contributed to it. You used words such as "alleviate" to show how much you care about your great uncle's well being, and words such as "honored" to show how helpful you could be if he adopted Spock. Your tone further solidified your argument because it showed that you argued from your heart and that you only want what is best for your great uncle. Your counterargument was also very well done. By addressing this critical obstacle to adopting the puppy, you showed that you understood his position. You also refuted this obstacle by proving that his allergies could be avoided if certain measures were taken. To make these measures seem more appealing, you offered to help him modify his house in order to overcome his allergies. All of these contributed to your effective argument.
Mom, in certain cases, you can look into the eyes of a person and tell that they have never been loved, but they are eager to get the chance. This is the exact sense you get when you look into the big, beautiful, sappy eyes of the puppy. This puppy will think of you as its entire life, even when you only see her as a partial piece of yours. That is the beauty of having a dog; you will always feel important knowing that something is always going to be waiting for you when you come home from a long day, wanting to spend every waking second with you and even snuggling up to you once you go to sleep at night. Also, unlike human companions, dogs cannot abandon you and will love you with its whole heart. So, we could basically get rid of Dad and be okay. This loving little fluff ball will know when you are upset and hope to do all in its ability to bring you out of your current sorrow. The protection that this dog can provide in the future is unbelievable! When she grows to her full potential, no one will be able to harm us in our home without us hearing a large barking alarm system. It's a big responsibility to own a puppy, I would be willing to put in every single ounce of effort to accommodate it's tiny needs. I will can guarantee you that I will be the very first person up with her when she begins to cry in the middle of the night to go to the bathroom and I will be the last person to hold her before she falls asleep in my arms. I will always remember to feed her and make other arraignments for when I am away. Also, imagine the much needed therapy that this puppy would provide! Colleges bring in dogs all the time during final and midterm weeks because it is scientifically proven that petting a dog and reduce stress. It is basically a free therapist. She will be the biggest pain and chew on everything we own, but at the end of the day, the immortal compassion that everyone will feel for this fluffy ball of love will out weigh the temporary love that we all feel for our material goods. Plus, she is potty trained, so we cannot lose in this deal. Love and no pee, what could be better?
Your introductory sentence is awesome. When I read it, I immediately thought of those commercials with the sad music, the beat up dogs, and the overly dramatic lady. While those commercials rarely evoke more than an eye roll and a scoff, I think your appeal of pathos is quite effective. I loved how you started off with the imagery of an abandoned human being, and then brought up the point about the dog. I think that many people are much more prone to sympathy when they consider a human as opposed to an animal, simply because not everyone feels the same attachments to animals. When you said "look into the eyes of a person," the reader immediately pictures an individual who has never experienced love, which is really quite sad to anyone with a heart. But then you slowly transition the idea of the dog into it, which gives the reader an altering viewpoint. It forces them to consider whether or not neglecting this dog would be equivalent to neglecting an unloved human being. Great job.
Jenna, I could really see you telling Rita this! It was very well done and I would have got the puppy for you if I was your mom. I loved how you put a lot of emphasis of how the puppy with help you emotionally. My favorite part had to be about getting rid of dad. It made it very comical. I liked how your tone was very persuading then could change to comical the in the next sentance. It really left me hanging on to your pled for the dog.
Jenna, I loved how you wrote this. The Pathos is really strong, especially in your opener when you are talking about seeing if someon has been loved by looking into their eyes. Also, when you mentioned that dogs will never leave, I could really see the Pathos. I thought that it was really funny that you said how your mom could just leave your dad and she would still be alright. You used not only pathos, but humor to accompany it.
Nymphadora, I am writing to you because I feel that what you need desperately at this time is a bit of contact from the outside world, and also because I have a proposition which I think you may be quite delighted by. I know that it must be very difficult spending your days cooped up in a mental hospital, but I assure you that in a few months, your depression will be dwindling, and you will find yourself much more content with your life. I have been considering this idea for quite some time now, and I have made the decision to present it to you. I believe that in order to beat this ailment that consumes you, you must first allow your mind to become occupied by something much more pleasant. That is why I am going to urge you to consider adopting a puppy. And the best part is, I already have the perfect one picked out for you. (Her name is Luna.) Firstly, owning a dog allows you to escape from the uneventful monotony of your everyday life. By composing a strict schedule that includes feeding, walking, grooming etc., you will find yourself much busier, and consequently less prone to succumb to despairing thoughts. This will also allow you to feel much more accomplished and keep you on track. Judith Siegel, PhD, who was involved in a recent study concerning the therapeutic properties of pets, claims that those who have a strong attraction to their pet can have a decreased risk of depression and anxiety. In addition, owning this dog would require you to take her on walks frequently. This will inevitably keep you fit, which aids to improve your mental health as well. A variety of studies have shown that routine physical activity allows one's body to remain feeling good, as their brain releases chemicals that contribute to a positive mindset. Finally, adopting this dog would present a sense of companionship - one that is unique to a pet. You will be able to vent your problems without having to worry about receiving poor advice, and without hurting someone's feelings. Furthermore, you will cease to feel so alone. I know that these last few months have been dark and lonely for you, but if you make the decision to adopt this puppy, I truly believe that you will begin to feel things looking up. I hope that you consider this as a viable option to beat your depression, and I have full confidence that you will remain strong during this dark time. Best regards
Mary, that was a good idea to give Nymphadora depression because a puppy would definitely help with that. My grandparents do not have depression, but ever since they lost their drivers license due to age and medical conditions they have been home bound. They had a Pomeranian named Natasha, and even though it was extremely annoying for my aunt who was nominated to take care of it everyday, it made my grandparents so happy. A person with depression would definitely consider adoption and all of the points you made were convincing.
I like how you give logical reasons on why they should own a dog. I think that is why a lot of old people own dogs, to prevent depression. It makes a little more sense since they would be a on busy schedule that would not allow them to feel sorry for themselves. They would be too busy taking care of the puppy! It will help their physical health too by taking the puppy on walks. This would be a great study to do, and an even better ad to show people with depression why they should have a puppy.
Mary, the logos and pathos in this plea is extravagant. I, like Grace, love that the puppy should be placed with someone who is depressed simply because it can shed light on the information that dogs actually do help people who are suffering from mental illness. This year, my mom was in charge of getting puppies for a program the Penn State does called "Destress Fest" and there they have all these activities to let students destress and pet dogs because they are proven to reduce anxiety. This women needs Luna!
Dear Mom and Dad, I started my job at the local human society last week. There was an adorable little puppy that came in three days ago, and I believe I found the perfect home for it. Wanna take a guess where? Your house! With hunter leaving soon for college, there is going to be a big emptiness in the house. This beautiful little puppy is very loving! I even got to name him! Mom I know you love his name, it's Pugsley! I remember you saying when I was a child that you would love a dog named Pugsley and now is the time to adopt him! With all your free time when hunter leaves, you will be able to spend a lot of time together. Maybe even to much time. With Pugsley, you two can take him on walks and to the park. Hunter and I also can come home and see him all the time. Hunter would love it and so would I! The animal shelter is packed with animals, so adopting Pugsley soon would be a good idea that way he doesn't get moved to another shelter. Dad's doctors always said that excise and happiness are the ways to make sure Cancer doesn't come back. The puppy will be just as attached go dad as Krispy was. Which could be a bad thing, but maybe he will like you more this time. Sure you would have your hands full with a new puppy being around again, but just think of all the excitement the puppy will bring. You will find yourself falling in love with him more and more everyday. When he first came into the shelter, he only liked me. He was very shy and hid from all the other workers. When it was my turn to see him he grab a toy out of the cage and wanted to play with me. That was when I knew that this dog had to be apart of my family. Why am I not keeping the puppy you ask? Well, I have adopted two very large dogs already and they would end up treating little Puglesy as one of their toys. There is no denying of that. I know you would love this dog very much, adopting it would make me look good at my new job too! Maybe I can set some of your friends up with an animal as well. I hope you decided to get the puppy because I put him on hold for you until you drive up here and get him. Congrats on adopting a new puppy! He is very excited to see you! With love, Maddie
I like how you made your blog into a letter! It was a great idea to think of how your parents will be lonely when you and Hunter are off at college. A dog would make a great companion! The appeals to pathos are good too. Who could deny a little puppy who is surrounded by big dogs and needs a good home?
Dad, look at this puppy! Isn't he just the cutest thing? We should take him home, and give him and name! I think Lucky would be a good name. I know he would be a lot of work, but Dan and I will take care of him. Dan will take him for walks daily. It will be perfect since we live right next to the park. He may be a little expensive, but Dan and I both have jobs. If Dan umpires a few games this week and I take last my week's wages together, we can pay for his food. I can drive him to the vet if he gets sick. Even better, pugs have short hair and don't require a lot of grooming. Considering that we are both allergic to dogs with long hair, it makes him an ever better pet! I think we were meant to find him! You know how much we have always wanted a puppy but never could have one because we were allergic. How many times does an opportunity like this come along? We get to save one of God's creatures and fulfill our desire of finally having a puppy! You and mom both had dogs as kids, wouldn't you like your kids to grow up with the same experiences? He looks pretty healthy too dad! I don't think we would have an expensive vet bill when we take him there for the first time. Dad, Dan and I can handle the responsibilities. We both have jobs, and need to help carry our weight the house. Have a dog will teach us even more responsibility! Plus, you know that both of us can get stressed, and having a puppy to play with will alleviate that. He will liven up our house too! I researched pugs! They are really friendly and mischevious! And how cute is he? You know you love him too! It may cost a little bit of money, but can you really put a price on something this cute? He is just begging to be loved! I know we haven't had a pet before, but we are old enough now to understand the responsibility that comes with it. We could all use a little bit more of laughter and fun in their lives! Let's take Lucky home and wash him up! We can give him a bed and some food! This is going to be the start of a great friendship!
Mom, I know it is going to be very hard for you to even consider a new dog at this time... But this small, adorable pug would be a perfect addition into the family. After the passing of Maggie, an amazing dog who we had in our family for around thirteen years, I could never imagine you wanting a dog of that size once again. It has been over one year since her passing and I know this has been the hardest on you. The whole family is on board, but all we need is you. We have taken into consideration your views and "our wants", and we have found a perfect breed just for you. The size is small and the training is minimal. If you allow us to adopt we would all do our share and not put the burden on you, Mom. Before you give in based on this picture, let me inform you about this interesting creature. His name is Gus and he is around two, an energetic puppy who just wants to love you. Mom, it was quite interesting to see that this dog barely barks, just like Maggie. We all know how important this is to you, because who wants a dog who barks at a shoe. We took a trip just to visit and out of these dogs this one was the friendliest.Its deep, loving brown eyes and cute curly tail are only the beginning of his interesting tale. The pup is without a mother and his brother so he is left on his own with no place to call his home. He was born with illnesses that now has been cured. We know you are the best to fill his one missing piece; the need for love and affection. We know these adoptions are not completely free, but there is a discount on this reasonable fee. Logan, Ben, and I have all decided to do our share by dividing the responsibilities of Gus's. We have each agreed that this will teach us about responsibility, because we were to young to be responsible with the training of Maggie. All four of your loving family members thought out every angle, and after a long discussion, we thought it was time to introduce you. Mom, if you believe this is the right decision, we will leave you the number, and you can call later on tonight.
Mother, we just have to adopt this puppy. Look at him, he is all alone with no one to love him. How do you think he feels sitting there day after day watching all of his friends leave while he stays there. He thinks that no one wants him, but I do, mom. How could we just let him keep thinking that there is no one out there who will care for him. Just look at his face. He is yearning for a better life. Just think how you would feel if you were him. You are probably thinking that if we adopt this puppy then you are going to be the one who will have to take care of him. I assure you that I will take care of him every second of the day. I know that owning a dog is expensive, but I have a job now and you will not have to pay for everything. Having this dog will be a life changing event for me. Holding another's life in my hands is a big responsibility I believe that I am ready for. This will be a great opportunity for me to learn what you have to go through every day with me. You might also be concerned with how I would take care of him while I am in school. I know that it might take some time, but I could train him like every other pet owner does. Like caring for the puppy, training him will help me to learn responsibility. Take a leap of faith, mom. You are always talking about how you believe that God will provide and that He does everything for a reason. Well what if God is telling me that I need to adopt this puppy. I know that I am suppose to adopt this puppy. If you have not fallen in love with this puppy by the time that I leave for college, then I promise that I will find a better home for him. I know tons of people who are looking for dogs. Even if I cannot find a home for this puppy, then I can take him to college with me. I just know that you will love this puppy once you have met him. Mother, adopting this puppy will be really good for me. It will help me understand how you have to put up with me every day. It will also teach me how to be responsible. I have the money to take care of this puppy. There is no good reason why I should not be able to adopt this puppy. I cannot allow him to sit there any longer by himself. So would you do this, not only for me, but for him as well.
Dad, just look at that face. We could really use another dog in the family. The last time we got a new animal, I was in middle school! I loved growing up with a dog in the house, especially when I was younger. Some of the best memories of my childhood involved our pets. It would really be a shame to deny my siblings this same privilege that I had as a child. You know that my sister really loves animals. Bringing this animal into a loving home would be so much better than putting it into a shelter. Think of this as an act of charity in with both parties will benefit greatly. God calls us to take care of all of His creatures and this poor, unfortunate dog needs our help. Even this little puppy is part of God’s creation and it need our help. Just think of what could happen to it if we don’t do something! I know you are going to say that my siblings and I haven’t taken care of the animals we have had before, but we have really grown up a lot. I have a lot of responsibilities as it is now, so another small job is not adding that much more. Also, Anthony feeds the dog every night now, so he would only have to fill another bowl! It would be great to get Bubbles, our dog, a new friend to play with so that she wouldn’t just have the cats. Although adopting a dog is not free, it is much cheaper and also a lot more rewarding than just buying a dog from the store. We would be saving this animal from spending its life inside a cage at a shelter. I think you should take all these points into consideration and think about all the positive things that could come to your children and our family if we adopted a new dog.
Abbey, I really enjoyed how you brought in the fact of growing up with animals as an experience. Parents are always drawn to have their children experience new enjoyable events. The fact that you brought this point you tied it in to the point of your younger sibling, by explaining that they too should have this opportunity. It shows that it is not only a benefit for you but for your siblings. I also enjoyed that you mentioned these animals as God's creation because it is really a twist when the Lord is included.
Dad, ever since I was a kid you have always expounded to me on the importance of giving to the less fortunate. You always had me pack up all my unwanted clothes and toys to have dispersed to those in need, and all of our efforts were very wonderful, we have a chance to make a direct impact on the life of a creature greatly in need of it. This dog had been abandoned by its previous owners in the woods where it was starved and frightened, but it is not too late to show this dog love and give the dog a more fortunate life. I always hear you complaining about how terrible it must be to be in a nursing home since you cannot do anything, but think of this poor dog in the shelter with no room to run around and play as dogs should. You and the dog can relate, and when I'm in college, this dog will keep you company. You can even name the dog after me and talk to her when you get lonely, and just imagine, the dog will actually obey unlike me! I know you always wanted Lauren to obey, and now you have your chance! Not only will you have company, dogs are known for their ability to lengthen lives, reduce stress, and improve health. This improvement in your health from the exercise will keep you out of the nursing home longer, Dad! I know that no one can substitute my company, but we have to think logically here, I cannot go to college in Saint Marys! Dad, pretty soon I am going to be living in New York City, and it will really give me a peace of mind if you had some protection as you are gracefully aging. There are many cases when animals have saved their owner's lives in cases of fires or falls. Not only that, but what if someone breaks into the house? You will have an alert system that will also comfort you after the trauma. I know you are probably worried about your yard with the excretions of having an animal, but there are ways you can teach a dog to use a toliet, and I promise I will so that before I leave for college. I will also take the dog to the obedience classes to make sure she will be in her best behavior. Come on, Dad, is there really a loser in this situation?
Lauren, I love the way you opened up your argument. By using an example such as helping and giving to the less fortunate it enables the person to think deeper in what is about to be said. Your example of the unused clothes flowed perfectly into the background of the dog and to further claims. All of your points were relevant and strongly supported the claims which were made. I believe that if I was the one being convinced, I would have greatly considered adopting this dog.
Lauren, I also loved how you opened up your argument. You use Pathos in an extreme way. Not only are you giving points to prove that your father should allow you to adopt this puppy, but you use morality to prove it. You use your words in such a powerful and effective way. If I showed this to my parents, they would have no other choice but to adopt this puppy.
Dad, this poor little puppy needs a family! Shawn was found on a cold, Christmas night on the side of the road. God is calling you to care for all of his creatures, and adopting Shawn is one simple step in the right direction.
ReplyDeleteResponsibility is an essential trait, and with a house full of children, this puppy can teach many life lessons. Walking the dog, feeding, and playing with him will keep the kids busy and will be the start a lifelong friendship. Although getting Shawn will teach me responsibility, I understand that I must already posses a certain amount of responsibility to take care of him in the first place. I have wonderful time management skills, and will be able to fit time into my schedule to give him the love that he deserves.
Adopting Shawn is not free, but I have a job and can help to pay for it. If we have enough money to have cable television all year around, take family vacations to the beach, and own more than one car, we can help this poor puppy. The local humane society always needs help and is filled with animals that need help. The myth that cats and dogs do not get along has be proven incorrect, and Orange Kibby and White Kibby are used to other animals since they came from a farm. It is often said that a dog is a man's best friend, and with the Kibbys getting older, the burden of a dead friend would not be nearly as harsh if we had another pet to love.
When you were younger, dad, you had two dogs. You always mention how often you played outside and ran around with them, and the common complaint of my brothers and I spending time inside can be eliminated if we can be privileged enough to have this puppy. Dogs are a lot like humans, and are protective, loving family members. Also, Shawn has the potential of bringing our family closer together. If we all spend time around him, we will be genuinely happier and work together more often to take care of him.
I know of an older couple whose kids were moved out. They were lonely, so they adopted a puppy that looked almost exactly like this precious animal. They immediately had a connection, and the dog was loyal to them, learned their rules, and followed them around the house to give them love and attention. After visiting this puppy, my brothers and I immediately had this same connection. Like two long lost sisters meeting for the first time, it is heart wrenching to force us all apart again. This is meant to happen, and with the pros outweighing the cons, adopting Shawn seems like the reasonable approach to save a puppy's disastrous life.
I really like how you started your argument off with a reference to the Bible. By reminding your father about God's will concerning the care of all creatures, you made him stop to really listen to your argument. This reference also added credibility to your argument through what seems to be divine support. It also showed that you knew what you were talking about and that you had prepared for this discussion. Parents are inclined to brush off arguments with no substance and look for clues as to the nature of an argument when their child first presents it. By showing him that you had truly considered the implications of your request, he took your argument seriously. The main points of your argument appeal to the logical and emotional side of your father. You logically explained how you would be able to provide for the dog, and also called upon his emotions by reminiscing about his childhood dogs. Both of these appeals contributed to your solid argument.
DeleteI love how you altered your argument to appeal to your audience. Obviously, mentioning God and His will for His children would not go over very well with everyone. Some individuals would not consider that convincing, or even an effective argument. However, being as your parents are very Catholic people, they would be much less apt to ignore these pleas. In addition, you brought up the point about how a dog can teach responsibilities in "a house full of children." Again, this specifically appeals to your parents, as "our family is big enough already" is a probable counterargument. Instead, you addressed this possible inhibition by turning it into an a benefit, which causes your parents to take a different perspective. Finally, you appealed very specifically to your dad when you mentioned his childhood. While this argument certainly would not have been as effective if presented to another individual, it was very well constructed to appeal to your audience. Nice work!
DeleteYour use of ethos at the very beginning of your plea is attention grabbing. When you bring God into the argument, it seems almost immoral to reject the puppy. Then, throughout the plea you also use a great deal of pathos and relatable situations that will almost inevitably happen. For example, when you list all of the problems that may arise from having this puppy, you come back with a positive outcome to help you prove your point about the dog being a good thing. If I was Mr. Dave Bobby, I would defiantly get you this puppy!
DeleteInvoking God at the beginning of your plea was very nice. We should always do what God wants, and I'm sure He is always in favor of adopting dogs. So nice touch. I didn't even think to do that. I also like how you brought up the misconception that cats and dogs do not like each other. Dogs just like to play a little more aggressively than cats like to play. I know when we had Sierra, she loved our house cat. People would always be astounded that we had both animals out and about at the same time. So I'm sure Orange Kibby and White Kibby will love Shawn. And also the story of how he was found on a cold Christmas night probably would people feel really bad. After all, if he was found on a normal night, it wouldn't really matter. But Christmas, that's a whole different story. All in all, well done. I'd adopt that dog after reading the first three paragraphs.
DeleteGrace, I thought you did a great job imploring pathos throughout your blog. If I was a parent, it would really appeal to my emotions. Also, the fact that you used God showed ethos and also pealed to a higher power which I thought was very effective. When you mentioned your kibbies, I laughed really hard. You used the right amount of ethos, pathos, and humor to make a compelling case about adopting the puppy. You convinced me to want to go out and adopt an animal.
DeleteMom, I think we should adopt this puppy. Salvador is just one of many homeless dogs that our local humane society has rescued. We could give him the home and the love that he's never had.
ReplyDeleteIn the past, we've had a multitude of different pets. We've had fish, rabbits, chickens, and even pigs. This range of animals has taught me all about caring for different species, and opened my eyes to the responsibilities of owning a pet. I think that a dog would need the same level of mundane care as the pigs and chickens did. However, dogs need more love and attention, which I would be happy to provide.
Caring for a dog would be hard because we are away from the house often, but I could give him plenty of attention when we are home. I have exceptional time management skills and can use them to create time for Salvador. In addition, Hannah would definitely play with Salvador all the time. When we do leave for extended periods of time, Salvador could stay with our cousins. I'm sure that Salvador and their dog would get along very well.
Dogs help relieve stress. Being with an animal frees up the brain and helps it relax. My high stress lifestyle would greatly benefit from a reduced amount of stress. If we adopted Salvador, the stressful events in my life might not change, but I would be able to respond to them in a more positive manner. Dogs often become loyal and life-long friends with their owners, and this constant supportive love would provide me with an emotional boost.
Dogs are expensive, and their extended care has costs as well. However, I have a steady job during the summer months at the pool, and could use this money to help pay for food and other necessities. I am taking on more responsibilities with my job, such as teaching swimming lessons and coaching the swim team. These added activities with provide me with more money so that the portion that goes to my college funding won't be drastically reduced.
I know you're allergic to animal hair, but I know that you are mainly allergic to cats. Salvador is a dog, so your allergies wouldn't be as severe as they would if we adopted a cat. Salvador won't shed very much, so there won't be hair all over our house anyways. Pugs have short hairs that don't shed, so your allergies won't be troubled by his presence.
The responsibilities of owning a pet are nothing that I haven't undertaken before. Over the course of our pet-owning lives, I have proven myself capable of taking care of many animals. Salvador would be easy for me to take care of, and he would prove to be an exceptional friend to me. I think that adopting Salvador would be a wonderful decision that would positively impact our daily lives.
First of all, you had pigs, rabbits, and chickens? Also, it makes me upset that you are coaching the team this year. You better practice anyway. But about your blog, you did a very good job convincing your mom to buy Salvador. It is important that you understood her possible concerns and addressed them with a solution to overcome the problem. You did this a few times and covered points such as costs, a dog-sitter for when you leave, and allergies. You also did a good job presenting the positives about the stress reducing factors of adopting the pet. Way to go, Ash! You would have convinced me!
DeleteAshley, I loved how you put in the downfalls your mother would see in getting the dog then putting the solution to it. That would leave your mother speechless and she would know just how much time you put into thinking about getting the dog. This would also leave her speechless at the end with no questions to ask becuase you already solved them. The only word she would be able to say is yes!
DeleteI'm with Grace Bobby on this one. Pigs, rabbits, and chickens seems like a lot. I don't know if I could handle more than one animal at a time. Anyways...you presented lots of very good points for why you should be allowed to adopt Salvador here. All of that would be for naught though if your mother's allergies were not taken care of. You offered a viable solution for the counterargument which would most likely be enough for your parents to allow you to adopt this puppy. I don't know how decisions are made in your house, but if my mother read that, she would probably beat my father up until he allowed us to adopt this dog. So well done
DeleteAshley, I'm not very good with animals, so pigs and rabbits sounds like a lot. I can't even keep a goldfish for a week. You thought of some interesting points that I did not come across when writing my blog. You also did a nice job in refuting the things you knew your mom would say about you getting a dog. I know there would have to be some persuasion in my house for my dad, my mom would jump at any chance she gets to adopt an animal.
DeleteGreat Uncle Jose Jambalaya, you should adopt this puppy to fill the space in the house that Great Aunt Jambalaya left when she sadly passed. You loved her and she kept you company for years. You are most likely very depressed. That is understandable. This dog can keep you company for years to come though. I know you will grow a deep attachment to this dog, and it will grow a deep attachment to you.
ReplyDeleteSo much heartache is happening for you all at once. I know you loved Star Trek, and Leonard Nimoy's passing probably is making you even more upset. Relax though. The shelter says that this puppy had no form of identification when they picked it up off the street. This means you can name it whatever you want. I'm sure naming it Spock is in order. This will strengthen the bond between you and the dog.
The fact you have to walk the dog will also make sure you keep exercising. I know you despise that old treadmill. If you got little Spock here, you would be able to take him on walks. I know you love to take walks. The dog will certainly love taking walks with you too. I know there's that nice trail out behind your house. You could take him on that. That'll make sure he is healthy, and you are healthy, too.
After school, Dominic and I could always come over to take care of him if you need some time to chill. We love dogs, and would be absolutely honored to take care of yours. It will also do a very good job teaching us about responsibility. This is a very key trait in our society.
Dogs do need to go to the vet every once in a while for checkups, injections, etc. Don't even worry about it. I got my license this past winter. This means that if Spock needs to go to the vet, I will take him. I know that you hate driving. So I have you covered. It'll be a fun car ride for the dog and I.
Now I know you are allergic to dog hair. That's ok. My brother and I will make sure he stays groomed and clean. This will reduce the amount of hair that he will shed. If we can keep the amount of hair down to 1 hair molecule for every 200 air molecules, you should not have a reaction. It will be easy to keep the air clean, because you have that air vent downstairs. If you want, I can bring it up and install it. That would alleviate this problem. Also, pugs do not shed as much if they have nutritious meals. Petco in Dubois has plenty of nutritious pet food. I usually end up going to Dubois once every other week to get supplies to make burritos. I could easily stop right in to Petco and grab this food.
You're probably wondering why I am so passionate about you adopting Spock. Well, I care for your well being. With the house being empty, you need some company. But also, my parents will not let us adopt a dog. They say it is too much work and they just do not want to deal with it. I understand why they think this. Last time we had a dog, my father ended up doing most of the work because we were too young to do anything. Now we are older and more mature. I believe that us three can make Spock live a fantastic life. And it'll certainly be good for you and him. The pound says that they estimated he was abandoned on the street for weeks. He was very much underweight and dying when they brought him in. He is slowly being nursed back to health, and I believe we can finish the job. So I really do think you should go ahead and adopt him. He will make a wonderful addition to the family.
Your argument was very well done. You combined logical reasons for adopting a dog with emotional reasons as to why your great uncle should adopt a dog. Each one of your supporting ideas was well thought out and presented in an understanding nature. Your tone was both concerned and helpful, and your diction and syntax contributed to it. You used words such as "alleviate" to show how much you care about your great uncle's well being, and words such as "honored" to show how helpful you could be if he adopted Spock. Your tone further solidified your argument because it showed that you argued from your heart and that you only want what is best for your great uncle. Your counterargument was also very well done. By addressing this critical obstacle to adopting the puppy, you showed that you understood his position. You also refuted this obstacle by proving that his allergies could be avoided if certain measures were taken. To make these measures seem more appealing, you offered to help him modify his house in order to overcome his allergies. All of these contributed to your effective argument.
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ReplyDeleteMom, in certain cases, you can look into the eyes of a person and tell that they have never been loved, but they are eager to get the chance. This is the exact sense you get when you look into the big, beautiful, sappy eyes of the puppy. This puppy will think of you as its entire life, even when you only see her as a partial piece of yours. That is the beauty of having a dog; you will always feel important knowing that something is always going to be waiting for you when you come home from a long day, wanting to spend every waking second with you and even snuggling up to you once you go to sleep at night. Also, unlike human companions, dogs cannot abandon you and will love you with its whole heart. So, we could basically get rid of Dad and be okay. This loving little fluff ball will know when you are upset and hope to do all in its ability to bring you out of your current sorrow. The protection that this dog can provide in the future is unbelievable! When she grows to her full potential, no one will be able to harm us in our home without us hearing a large barking alarm system. It's a big responsibility to own a puppy, I would be willing to put in every single ounce of effort to accommodate it's tiny needs. I will can guarantee you that I will be the very first person up with her when she begins to cry in the middle of the night to go to the bathroom and I will be the last person to hold her before she falls asleep in my arms. I will always remember to feed her and make other arraignments for when I am away. Also, imagine the much needed therapy that this puppy would provide! Colleges bring in dogs all the time during final and midterm weeks because it is scientifically proven that petting a dog and reduce stress. It is basically a free therapist. She will be the biggest pain and chew on everything we own, but at the end of the day, the immortal compassion that everyone will feel for this fluffy ball of love will out weigh the temporary love that we all feel for our material goods. Plus, she is potty trained, so we cannot lose in this deal. Love and no pee, what could be better?
ReplyDeleteYour introductory sentence is awesome. When I read it, I immediately thought of those commercials with the sad music, the beat up dogs, and the overly dramatic lady. While those commercials rarely evoke more than an eye roll and a scoff, I think your appeal of pathos is quite effective. I loved how you started off with the imagery of an abandoned human being, and then brought up the point about the dog. I think that many people are much more prone to sympathy when they consider a human as opposed to an animal, simply because not everyone feels the same attachments to animals. When you said "look into the eyes of a person," the reader immediately pictures an individual who has never experienced love, which is really quite sad to anyone with a heart. But then you slowly transition the idea of the dog into it, which gives the reader an altering viewpoint. It forces them to consider whether or not neglecting this dog would be equivalent to neglecting an unloved human being. Great job.
DeleteJenna, I could really see you telling Rita this! It was very well done and I would have got the puppy for you if I was your mom. I loved how you put a lot of emphasis of how the puppy with help you emotionally. My favorite part had to be about getting rid of dad. It made it very comical. I liked how your tone was very persuading then could change to comical the in the next sentance. It really left me hanging on to your pled for the dog.
DeleteJenna, I loved how you wrote this. The Pathos is really strong, especially in your opener when you are talking about seeing if someon has been loved by looking into their eyes. Also, when you mentioned that dogs will never leave, I could really see the Pathos. I thought that it was really funny that you said how your mom could just leave your dad and she would still be alright. You used not only pathos, but humor to accompany it.
DeleteNymphadora,
ReplyDeleteI am writing to you because I feel that what you need desperately at this time is a bit of contact from the outside world, and also because I have a proposition which I think you may be quite delighted by. I know that it must be very difficult spending your days cooped up in a mental hospital, but I assure you that in a few months, your depression will be dwindling, and you will find yourself much more content with your life. I have been considering this idea for quite some time now, and I have made the decision to present it to you.
I believe that in order to beat this ailment that consumes you, you must first allow your mind to become occupied by something much more pleasant. That is why I am going to urge you to consider adopting a puppy. And the best part is, I already have the perfect one picked out for you. (Her name is Luna.)
Firstly, owning a dog allows you to escape from the uneventful monotony of your everyday life. By composing a strict schedule that includes feeding, walking, grooming etc., you will find yourself much busier, and consequently less prone to succumb to despairing thoughts. This will also allow you to feel much more accomplished and keep you on track. Judith Siegel, PhD, who was involved in a recent study concerning the therapeutic properties of pets, claims that those who have a strong attraction to their pet can have a decreased risk of depression and anxiety.
In addition, owning this dog would require you to take her on walks frequently. This will inevitably keep you fit, which aids to improve your mental health as well. A variety of studies have shown that routine physical activity allows one's body to remain feeling good, as their brain releases chemicals that contribute to a positive mindset.
Finally, adopting this dog would present a sense of companionship - one that is unique to a pet. You will be able to vent your problems without having to worry about receiving poor advice, and without hurting someone's feelings. Furthermore, you will cease to feel so alone. I know that these last few months have been dark and lonely for you, but if you make the decision to adopt this puppy, I truly believe that you will begin to feel things looking up.
I hope that you consider this as a viable option to beat your depression, and I have full confidence that you will remain strong during this dark time.
Best regards
Mary, that was a good idea to give Nymphadora depression because a puppy would definitely help with that. My grandparents do not have depression, but ever since they lost their drivers license due to age and medical conditions they have been home bound. They had a Pomeranian named Natasha, and even though it was extremely annoying for my aunt who was nominated to take care of it everyday, it made my grandparents so happy. A person with depression would definitely consider adoption and all of the points you made were convincing.
DeleteI like how you give logical reasons on why they should own a dog. I think that is why a lot of old people own dogs, to prevent depression. It makes a little more sense since they would be a on busy schedule that would not allow them to feel sorry for themselves. They would be too busy taking care of the puppy! It will help their physical health too by taking the puppy on walks. This would be a great study to do, and an even better ad to show people with depression why they should have a puppy.
DeleteMary, the logos and pathos in this plea is extravagant. I, like Grace, love that the puppy should be placed with someone who is depressed simply because it can shed light on the information that dogs actually do help people who are suffering from mental illness. This year, my mom was in charge of getting puppies for a program the Penn State does called "Destress Fest" and there they have all these activities to let students destress and pet dogs because they are proven to reduce anxiety. This women needs Luna!
DeleteDear Mom and Dad,
ReplyDeleteI started my job at the local human society last week. There was an adorable little puppy that came in three days ago, and I believe I found the perfect home for it. Wanna take a guess where? Your house! With hunter leaving soon for college, there is going to be a big emptiness in the house. This beautiful little puppy is very loving! I even got to name him! Mom I know you love his name, it's Pugsley! I remember you saying when I was a child that you would love a dog named Pugsley and now is the time to adopt him!
With all your free time when hunter leaves, you will be able to spend a lot of time together. Maybe even to much time. With Pugsley, you two can take him on walks and to the park. Hunter and I also can come home and see him all the time. Hunter would love it and so would I! The animal shelter is packed with animals, so adopting Pugsley soon would be a good idea that way he doesn't get moved to another shelter. Dad's doctors always said that excise and happiness are the ways to make sure Cancer doesn't come back. The puppy will be just as attached go dad as Krispy was. Which could be a bad thing, but maybe he will like you more this time.
Sure you would have your hands full with a new puppy being around again, but just think of all the excitement the puppy will bring. You will find yourself falling in love with him more and more everyday.
When he first came into the shelter, he only liked me. He was very shy and hid from all the other workers. When it was my turn to see him he grab a toy out of the cage and wanted to play with me. That was when I knew that this dog had to be apart of my family. Why am I not keeping the puppy you ask? Well, I have adopted two very large dogs already and they would end up treating little Puglesy as one of their toys. There is no denying of that.
I know you would love this dog very much, adopting it would make me look good at my new job too! Maybe I can set some of your friends up with an animal as well. I hope you decided to get the puppy because I put him on hold for you until you drive up here and get him. Congrats on adopting a new puppy! He is very excited to see you!
With love, Maddie
I like how you made your blog into a letter! It was a great idea to think of how your parents will be lonely when you and Hunter are off at college. A dog would make a great companion! The appeals to pathos are good too. Who could deny a little puppy who is surrounded by big dogs and needs a good home?
DeleteDad, look at this puppy! Isn't he just the cutest thing? We should take him home, and give him and name! I think Lucky would be a good name.
ReplyDeleteI know he would be a lot of work, but Dan and I will take care of him. Dan will take him for walks daily. It will be perfect since we live right next to the park. He may be a little expensive, but Dan and I both have jobs. If Dan umpires a few games this week and I take last my week's wages together, we can pay for his food. I can drive him to the vet if he gets sick.
Even better, pugs have short hair and don't require a lot of grooming. Considering that we are both allergic to dogs with long hair, it makes him an ever better pet! I think we were meant to find him! You know how much we have always wanted a puppy but never could have one because we were allergic. How many times does an opportunity like this come along? We get to save one of God's creatures and fulfill our desire of finally having a puppy! You and mom both had dogs as kids, wouldn't you like your kids to grow up with the same experiences?
He looks pretty healthy too dad! I don't think we would have an expensive vet bill when we take him there for the first time.
Dad, Dan and I can handle the responsibilities. We both have jobs, and need to help carry our weight the house. Have a dog will teach us even more responsibility! Plus, you know that both of us can get stressed, and having a puppy to play with will alleviate that. He will liven up our house too! I researched pugs! They are really friendly and mischevious! And how cute is he? You know you love him too! It may cost a little bit of money, but can you really put a price on something this cute? He is just begging to be loved! I know we haven't had a pet before, but we are old enough now to understand the responsibility that comes with it. We could all use a little bit more of laughter and fun in their lives! Let's take Lucky home and wash him up! We can give him a bed and some food! This is going to be the start of a great friendship!
Mom, I know it is going to be very hard for you to even consider a new dog at this time... But this small, adorable pug would be a perfect addition into the family. After the passing of Maggie, an amazing dog who we had in our family for around thirteen years, I could never imagine you wanting a dog of that size once again. It has been over one year since her passing and I know this has been the hardest on you. The whole family is on board, but all we need is you. We have taken into consideration your views and "our wants", and we have found a perfect breed just for you. The size is small and the training is minimal. If you allow us to adopt we would all do our share and not put the burden on you, Mom. Before you give in based on this picture, let me inform you about this interesting creature. His name is Gus and he is around two, an energetic puppy who just wants to love you. Mom, it was quite interesting to see that this dog barely barks, just like Maggie. We all know how important this is to you, because who wants a dog who barks at a shoe. We took a trip just to visit and out of these dogs this one was the friendliest.Its deep, loving brown eyes and cute curly tail are only the beginning of his interesting tale. The pup is without a mother and his brother so he is left on his own with no place to call his home. He was born with illnesses that now has been cured. We know you are the best to fill his one missing piece; the need for love and affection. We know these adoptions are not completely free, but there is a discount on this reasonable fee. Logan, Ben, and I have all decided to do our share by dividing the responsibilities of Gus's. We have each agreed that this will teach us about responsibility, because we were to young to be responsible with the training of Maggie. All four of your loving family members thought out every angle, and after a long discussion, we thought it was time to introduce you. Mom, if you believe this is the right decision, we will leave you the number, and you can call later on tonight.
ReplyDeleteMother, we just have to adopt this puppy. Look at him, he is all alone with no one to love him. How do you think he feels sitting there day after day watching all of his friends leave while he stays there. He thinks that no one wants him, but I do, mom. How could we just let him keep thinking that there is no one out there who will care for him. Just look at his face. He is yearning for a better life. Just think how you would feel if you were him.
ReplyDeleteYou are probably thinking that if we adopt this puppy then you are going to be the one who will have to take care of him. I assure you that I will take care of him every second of the day. I know that owning a dog is expensive, but I have a job now and you will not have to pay for everything. Having this dog will be a life changing event for me. Holding another's life in my hands is a big responsibility I believe that I am ready for. This will be a great opportunity for me to learn what you have to go through every day with me.
You might also be concerned with how I would take care of him while I am in school. I know that it might take some time, but I could train him like every other pet owner does. Like caring for the puppy, training him will help me to learn responsibility.
Take a leap of faith, mom. You are always talking about how you believe that God will provide and that He does everything for a reason. Well what if God is telling me that I need to adopt this puppy. I know that I am suppose to adopt this puppy.
If you have not fallen in love with this puppy by the time that I leave for college, then I promise that I will find a better home for him. I know tons of people who are looking for dogs. Even if I cannot find a home for this puppy, then I can take him to college with me. I just know that you will love this puppy once you have met him.
Mother, adopting this puppy will be really good for me. It will help me understand how you have to put up with me every day. It will also teach me how to be responsible. I have the money to take care of this puppy. There is no good reason why I should not be able to adopt this puppy. I cannot allow him to sit there any longer by himself. So would you do this, not only for me, but for him as well.
Dad, just look at that face. We could really use another dog in the family. The last time we got a new animal, I was in middle school! I loved growing up with a dog in the house, especially when I was younger. Some of the best memories of my childhood involved our pets. It would really be a shame to deny my siblings this same privilege that I had as a child. You know that my sister really loves animals. Bringing this animal into a loving home would be so much better than putting it into a shelter. Think of this as an act of charity in with both parties will benefit greatly. God calls us to take care of all of His creatures and this poor, unfortunate dog needs our help. Even this little puppy is part of God’s creation and it need our help. Just think of what could happen to it if we don’t do something! I know you are going to say that my siblings and I haven’t taken care of the animals we have had before, but we have really grown up a lot. I have a lot of responsibilities as it is now, so another small job is not adding that much more. Also, Anthony feeds the dog every night now, so he would only have to fill another bowl! It would be great to get Bubbles, our dog, a new friend to play with so that she wouldn’t just have the cats. Although adopting a dog is not free, it is much cheaper and also a lot more rewarding than just buying a dog from the store. We would be saving this animal from spending its life inside a cage at a shelter. I think you should take all these points into consideration and think about all the positive things that could come to your children and our family if we adopted a new dog.
ReplyDeleteAbbey, I really enjoyed how you brought in the fact of growing up with animals as an experience. Parents are always drawn to have their children experience new enjoyable events. The fact that you brought this point you tied it in to the point of your younger sibling, by explaining that they too should have this opportunity. It shows that it is not only a benefit for you but for your siblings. I also enjoyed that you mentioned these animals as God's creation because it is really a twist when the Lord is included.
DeleteDad, ever since I was a kid you have always expounded to me on the importance of giving to the less fortunate. You always had me pack up all my unwanted clothes and toys to have dispersed to those in need, and all of our efforts were very wonderful, we have a chance to make a direct impact on the life of a creature greatly in need of it. This dog had been abandoned by its previous owners in the woods where it was starved and frightened, but it is not too late to show this dog love and give the dog a more fortunate life. I always hear you complaining about how terrible it must be to be in a nursing home since you cannot do anything, but think of this poor dog in the shelter with no room to run around and play as dogs should. You and the dog can relate, and when I'm in college, this dog will keep you company. You can even name the dog after me and talk to her when you get lonely, and just imagine, the dog will actually obey unlike me! I know you always wanted Lauren to obey, and now you have your chance! Not only will you have company, dogs are known for their ability to lengthen lives, reduce stress, and improve health. This improvement in your health from the exercise will keep you out of the nursing home longer, Dad! I know that no one can substitute my company, but we have to think logically here, I cannot go to college in Saint Marys! Dad, pretty soon I am going to be living in New York City, and it will really give me a peace of mind if you had some protection as you are gracefully aging. There are many cases when animals have saved their owner's lives in cases of fires or falls. Not only that, but what if someone breaks into the house? You will have an alert system that will also comfort you after the trauma. I know you are probably worried about your yard with the excretions of having an animal, but there are ways you can teach a dog to use a toliet, and I promise I will so that before I leave for college. I will also take the dog to the obedience classes to make sure she will be in her best behavior. Come on, Dad, is there really a loser in this situation?
ReplyDeleteLauren, I love the way you opened up your argument. By using an example such as helping and giving to the less fortunate it enables the person to think deeper in what is about to be said. Your example of the unused clothes flowed perfectly into the background of the dog and to further claims. All of your points were relevant and strongly supported the claims which were made. I believe that if I was the one being convinced, I would have greatly considered adopting this dog.
DeleteLauren, I also loved how you opened up your argument. You use Pathos in an extreme way. Not only are you giving points to prove that your father should allow you to adopt this puppy, but you use morality to prove it. You use your words in such a powerful and effective way. If I showed this to my parents, they would have no other choice but to adopt this puppy.
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